版標更改為「TOEFL 30!! by Canny G」，並加上另外兩個主題部落格（自由之路、泰北金三角服務記錄）的連結。
原本這些主題都放在舊版Blogger，現在全部移到正式版Blogger，舊版的帳號也會封起來了吧...
I've Changed the blog topic to " TOEFL 30!! by Canny G", and added the other 2 blogs hyperlinks at sidebar, which are "Financial Freedom (Chinese)" and "In Northern Thailand (Chinese)".
These blogs were builded in old Blogger. Now all of the themes have moved to new Blogger, and the account in old one may be closed later...
2007年3月3日 星期六
[Writing] About Changes...
Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Why?
(Essay goes:
1.change-excite challenge and fulfillment
2.not change-safe
3.compare- challenge v.s. safe
4.conclution-fun, change
Essay ends)
I believe that some people enjoy change for the excitement. I enjoy the excitingness and fun of looking forward to new experiences. It’s a good challenge to me to make a change on my usual habits and the environment I stay in. And it makes me feel fulfillment to overcome the problems from new environments. I feel myself different from that I was in the past.
And there are also some people satisfied with the circumstance they get used to. To those people, change brings them the threat on economics and change may force them to give up some of their usual behaviors, which make them comfortable. Some of them may have responsibility for their families so that they are afraid of the economical threat caused by change. And others are not powerful enough to encourage themselves to take the chance to change. For instance, they may feel uncomfortable to get up earlier than before or to go abroad alone for studying.
The more I sport, the stronger my body is. And so is my mind. My mind would be strong to face the challenges and threats as much as I take the chance to change myself. Even though it’s easy to stay the same without change, I may lose the opportunity to make myself better.
Surely not all changes are good, and some changes may cause bad efforts that make me lose my money, my friendship, my health or even my life, like smoking or drugging. But the important thing is how much I can face threats easy and change myself better to overcome the threats. In other words, I wonder how much I can grow up to face unknown problems.
If I learn enough to declare right from wrong, I can make correct decision to keep bad changes from me. If changes without bad effects help me grow up, why not change?
(Total 314 words.)
UPDATED: I found a mistake here:
"To those people, change brings them the threat on economics and change may force them to give up some of their usual behaviors, which make them comfortable. "
I shouldn't add the "," before "which". Readers may misunderstand what I mean. "Do you mean that those guys would feel comfortable with forcing themselves to give up their usual behaivors?"
I should correct it as
"... to give up some of their usual behaviors that (or which) make them comfortable."
or
"... to give up some of their usual behaviors, which would make them uncomfortable."
(Essay goes:
1.change-excite challenge and fulfillment
2.not change-safe
3.compare- challenge v.s. safe
4.conclution-fun, change
Essay ends)
I believe that some people enjoy change for the excitement. I enjoy the excitingness and fun of looking forward to new experiences. It’s a good challenge to me to make a change on my usual habits and the environment I stay in. And it makes me feel fulfillment to overcome the problems from new environments. I feel myself different from that I was in the past.
And there are also some people satisfied with the circumstance they get used to. To those people, change brings them the threat on economics and change may force them to give up some of their usual behaviors, which make them comfortable. Some of them may have responsibility for their families so that they are afraid of the economical threat caused by change. And others are not powerful enough to encourage themselves to take the chance to change. For instance, they may feel uncomfortable to get up earlier than before or to go abroad alone for studying.
The more I sport, the stronger my body is. And so is my mind. My mind would be strong to face the challenges and threats as much as I take the chance to change myself. Even though it’s easy to stay the same without change, I may lose the opportunity to make myself better.
Surely not all changes are good, and some changes may cause bad efforts that make me lose my money, my friendship, my health or even my life, like smoking or drugging. But the important thing is how much I can face threats easy and change myself better to overcome the threats. In other words, I wonder how much I can grow up to face unknown problems.
If I learn enough to declare right from wrong, I can make correct decision to keep bad changes from me. If changes without bad effects help me grow up, why not change?
(Total 314 words.)
UPDATED: I found a mistake here:
"To those people, change brings them the threat on economics and change may force them to give up some of their usual behaviors, which make them comfortable. "
I shouldn't add the "," before "which". Readers may misunderstand what I mean. "Do you mean that those guys would feel comfortable with forcing themselves to give up their usual behaivors?"
I should correct it as
"... to give up some of their usual behaviors that (or which) make them comfortable."
or
"... to give up some of their usual behaviors, which would make them uncomfortable."
[Writing] About Friends
Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?
(Essay goes:
1.Intro-
2.similar friends good- easy to be with, easy to understand
3.different friends good-helpful on my weakness, make me think different
4.compare-
5.conclution
Essay ends)
I have both kind of friends, the friends similar to me and the friends different from me. Each kind of friends has benefits to me and helps me a lot.
I choose friends who are similar to me so that I can stay with them easy. Since we have the same characteristics, the same behavior and the same interesting and hobbies, we can soon understand each other and have a topic to talk about easily. I feel comfortable to have friends who understand what I think about, and so do my friends. We know what we like and what we dislike. And we can talk about our hobbies and our favorite kind of music, singers and records.
I also choose friends who are different from me. Different kinds of friends may be helpful on my weakness. Since I am inpatient and I usually try to do everything quickly despite of mistakes, a patient friend may help me careful to avoid some serious mistakes caused by my inpatient. Different kinds of friends may also make me think different from what I thought before.
It’s quite difficult to me to decide which kind of friends I prefer. Friends similar to me make me feel comfortable and easy, and friends different from me grow me up by the different way we doing things and the different thoughts we think about. Even though sometimes they make me uneasy to stay with them, they help me to be multiple thinking so that I can consider something in different ways.
If I have to choose one of them now, I prefer friends who are different from me. I think that it’s my best time now to learn, and friends different from me may help me learn what I never thought before and make me grow up to be matured. Although it may make me feel uncomfortable, it’s helpful.
(Total 312 words.)
(Essay goes:
1.Intro-
2.similar friends good- easy to be with, easy to understand
3.different friends good-helpful on my weakness, make me think different
4.compare-
5.conclution
Essay ends)
I have both kind of friends, the friends similar to me and the friends different from me. Each kind of friends has benefits to me and helps me a lot.
I choose friends who are similar to me so that I can stay with them easy. Since we have the same characteristics, the same behavior and the same interesting and hobbies, we can soon understand each other and have a topic to talk about easily. I feel comfortable to have friends who understand what I think about, and so do my friends. We know what we like and what we dislike. And we can talk about our hobbies and our favorite kind of music, singers and records.
I also choose friends who are different from me. Different kinds of friends may be helpful on my weakness. Since I am inpatient and I usually try to do everything quickly despite of mistakes, a patient friend may help me careful to avoid some serious mistakes caused by my inpatient. Different kinds of friends may also make me think different from what I thought before.
It’s quite difficult to me to decide which kind of friends I prefer. Friends similar to me make me feel comfortable and easy, and friends different from me grow me up by the different way we doing things and the different thoughts we think about. Even though sometimes they make me uneasy to stay with them, they help me to be multiple thinking so that I can consider something in different ways.
If I have to choose one of them now, I prefer friends who are different from me. I think that it’s my best time now to learn, and friends different from me may help me learn what I never thought before and make me grow up to be matured. Although it may make me feel uncomfortable, it’s helpful.
(Total 312 words.)
TOEFL 30!!
Canny is preparing for TOEFL, and all the other of the articles in this blog are my writing practice for TOEFL.
If there's any problem of grammer, words or structures in articles, please leave a comment to tell me.
Sincerely thank you for your visiting and helping. :)
Canny在此正為了托福而奮鬥中，接下來的文章都是Canny的托福作文練習結果。
如果各位有看到文章當中任何文法錯誤、用字錯誤或是文意不當之處，希望各位不吝指教。
感謝各位蒞臨相助。 :)
If there's any problem of grammer, words or structures in articles, please leave a comment to tell me.
Sincerely thank you for your visiting and helping. :)
Canny在此正為了托福而奮鬥中，接下來的文章都是Canny的托福作文練習結果。
如果各位有看到文章當中任何文法錯誤、用字錯誤或是文意不當之處，希望各位不吝指教。
感謝各位蒞臨相助。 :)
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