Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Why?
(Essay goes:
1.change-excite challenge and fulfillment
2.not change-safe
3.compare- challenge v.s. safe
4.conclution-fun, change
Essay ends)
I believe that some people enjoy change for the excitement. I enjoy the excitingness and fun of looking forward to new experiences. It’s a good challenge to me to make a change on my usual habits and the environment I stay in. And it makes me feel fulfillment to overcome the problems from new environments. I feel myself different from that I was in the past.
And there are also some people satisfied with the circumstance they get used to. To those people, change brings them the threat on economics and change may force them to give up some of their usual behaviors, which make them comfortable. Some of them may have responsibility for their families so that they are afraid of the economical threat caused by change. And others are not powerful enough to encourage themselves to take the chance to change. For instance, they may feel uncomfortable to get up earlier than before or to go abroad alone for studying.
The more I sport, the stronger my body is. And so is my mind. My mind would be strong to face the challenges and threats as much as I take the chance to change myself. Even though it’s easy to stay the same without change, I may lose the opportunity to make myself better.
Surely not all changes are good, and some changes may cause bad efforts that make me lose my money, my friendship, my health or even my life, like smoking or drugging. But the important thing is how much I can face threats easy and change myself better to overcome the threats. In other words, I wonder how much I can grow up to face unknown problems.
If I learn enough to declare right from wrong, I can make correct decision to keep bad changes from me. If changes without bad effects help me grow up, why not change?
(Total 314 words.)
UPDATED: I found a mistake here:
"To those people, change brings them the threat on economics and change may force them to give up some of their usual behaviors, which make them comfortable. "
I shouldn't add the "," before "which". Readers may misunderstand what I mean. "Do you mean that those guys would feel comfortable with forcing themselves to give up their usual behaivors?"
I should correct it as
"... to give up some of their usual behaviors that (or which) make them comfortable."
or
"... to give up some of their usual behaviors, which would make them uncomfortable."
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